Thursday, July 22, 2010

Grief













              I made you believe in 'YOU',
              you thrashed my belief in 'ME',
              I fought the world for 'YOU'
              you end up hurting 'ME'.......


19 comments:

  1. PS:This is not my own grief but of a friend.

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  2. let the grief be of anybody....it grieved....nice poem.

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  3. You care so much of others. That's great. Nice poem.

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  4. speechless.... i felt that.

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  5. Nice writing I feel pain for your friend but I know very well that God Has plan for her ..It's hard right now but she will eventually find happiness in life. God Bless her keep supporting her the way you are supporting her now.

    Love
    Sabi Sunshine

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  6. Simply mindblowing. Each line represent tough reality. Well done.

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  7. It may be of anyone..but so sad ..

    hope everything will be fine soon..

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  8. @Virendra ji: I'm grateful to you for your words..thanks!

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  9. @Sabi: so nice of you ...thanks!

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  10. @Anonymous Someone s: thanks!

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  11. @Vivek:yep...anyways thanks for the read!

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  13. i appreciate the poetry but i hate the posts of this kind..which depict the demanding behaviour/expectations in love n more thant anything it seems like a complaint! this is my take! donot intend to hurt anyone's feeling !

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