You share your happinesses with me,
I'll augment it manifold
You reel off your pain
I'll try to lessen the cold.
I'll also share my joys with you
If you do not at all mind,
but my sorrows are all mine alone
'un-said' and perhaps 'un-confined' !
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
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Unfair!
ReplyDeleteis that the only condition?
ReplyDelete@Divesh: why??
ReplyDelete@Rajat:condition??...couldn't get you!!!
ReplyDeleteYou cannot expect someone to "reel off their pain" if you keep your sorrows to yourself.
ReplyDelete@Divesh: what if I never let them know that I'm sad...and they can never make out that I'm in pain!!!
ReplyDeletenot humanly possible.. they who care will know.
ReplyDeleteI have to think many times before write anything on "MY LITTLE WORLD". Many times your post demands a lot of thinking from my side.
ReplyDeleteNow this time I'd like to say that everything depends on person to person. This is my opinion.
I may be wrong.
Well ..Congrats on your nice work(This post).
Divesh said it,
ReplyDeleteUnfair.
this is not love, neither it is companionship. But isn't it what we all do? keep the pain hidden, share all the joys and expect our beloved to share their pains with us. Unfair, but still.
hey
ReplyDeleteits should be like this
u must also be honest to share
i would say its completely justified to keep ur pains your own.....isn't it? only joys should be shared no pains........
ReplyDelete@Divesh:yeah...but not everyone cares,no?....anyways..I do this(i.e hide my pain)....so I have to disagree you!
ReplyDelete@Blasphemous Aesthete :first thing is that the 'you' above can be anyone -friends,relatives etc etc...and second thing is that I don't expect 'you' to reel off his/her pain...but if he/she does...I'll definitely try to console!
ReplyDelete@Virendra ji: yeah...it's my own way...thank you for the read!
ReplyDeleteya sometimes itz difficult to decide whether we should share our pain with somebody or not....
ReplyDeleteand itz also difficult to choose that somebody.....
but as divesh said they will know who really care 4 you..
nice poem..keep writing..
मेरे ब्लॉग पर इस बार धर्मवीर भारती की एक रचना...
जरूर आएँ.....
fair enough! i agree...the pain is not required to b shared .y? d very simple idea is: this is my pain..n i CAN deal wid it! i dont need a helping hand!
ReplyDeleteloved the poetry for the sheer idea of self- belief n independence! good work!
Its better to hide your pain...no one wants to b surrounded by sad faces... very beautiful poem...
ReplyDeletevery nice..........
ReplyDeletethanks
condition: but my sorrows are all mine alone
ReplyDelete'un-said' and perhaps 'un-confined'.. why don't we share our sorrows and joys as well
Great writing...
ReplyDelete@Shekhar:thanks!
ReplyDelete@Maverick: thank you for understanding :)
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